Welcome to my stop on the Virtual Book Tour for The Perfect Lap by Sedona Hutton. This tour was organized by Goddess Fish Promotions. On my stop, I have an excerpt for you as well as a guest post about characterization. There's also a tour wide giveaway. Be sure to follow the rest of the tour for more excerpts, guest posts, interviews, reviews, and more. Enjoy!
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Title: The Perfect LapSeries: Racing Hearts in Serenity #2)
Author: Sedona Hutton
Publisher: Rocky Top Book Press
Publication Date: April 29th 2019
Genre: Contemporary Romance
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His job is to drive fast. Hers is to put the brakes on him. When sparks fly, will love cross the finish line?
AJ Ryan is a publicity nightmare. After a questionable photo surfaces and his biggest sponsor threatens to pull out, the NASCAR champion admits it might be time to hit the brakes. Thankfully, his new no-nonsense image consultant knows just where to start… too bad she revs his engine so loudly he can barely think straight.
Ella Fisher’s career is a welcome distraction from her poor taste in men. Fresh off another easily avoidable heartbreak, rehabbing AJ’s career is just the diversion she needs. But when the pulse-pounding client actually listens to her advice, Ella wonders if there’s more to the man behind the hot mess.
When Ella is granted guardianship of three boisterous children under the misconception that she and AJ are a couple, AJ surprises her by going along with the charade. Before long they find themselves in a make-shift family that feels more real than pretend.
As their professional relationship takes a hard turn for the personal, a single overheard conversation could make it all go up in flames. Will Ella and AJ’s romance hit the wall, or will love take the checkered flag?
The Perfect Lap is the second standalone novel in the Racing Hearts of Serenity romance series. If you like bad boys with a heart of gold, strong women, and love stories with a new age twist, then you’ll adore Sedona Hutton’s fun, sexy tale.
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EXCERPT:
“I bet you have a beautiful smile,” he drawled, then lowered his mouth to hers.
She should have pulled away—she didn’t know this man from Adam. But everything inside her protested. After gazing into each other’s eyes, she felt like she knew him intimately.
His lips were warm and tingly, his kiss pure perfection…and he drew back way too quickly. He blinked those deep blue eyes and gave her a lazy grin. “I knew it.” He rubbed the pad of his thumb over her lower lip. “Beautiful.”
That’s when she realized she was smiling.
He rose, and she gave him a quick once over, taking in the sexy stubble on his face, the taut muscles of his chest, his lean physique. As good old-fashioned lust rolled through her like a quick-moving thunderstorm, she silently bemoaned her situation. This was a hell of a time to have a newly implemented man-ban.
“Keep smiling.” Stuffing his hands in his pockets, he winked at her. “It suits you,” he added in that low, sexy drawl. Then he sauntered off.
Her breath caught as she spun around to gape at him. He’d just kissed her and now he was leaving? She contemplated calling him back, then reconsidered. She had other fish to fry.
Even so, she couldn’t stop herself from tracking his every move as he swaggered toward the party, his backside looking every bit as fine as the rest of him. Pressing a hand to her chest, she let out a slow exhale. Even though she was one-hundred percent committed to her man-ban, she could admit—at least to herself—that the sexy, charming stranger had intrigued her.
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Author Sedona Hutton finds inspiration in the beautiful Smoky Mountains of Tennessee, where she lives with her husband and curly-coated retriever. In addition to writing, she’s a Reiki Master and a certified Chopra Center Meditation instructor. She enjoys reading, yoga, gardening, and experiencing the great outdoors on boats, motorcycles, and Jeeps. Sedona pens a “Peace, Love, & Joy” blog on her website.
Sedona’s debut novel, Cloud Whispers, was a Finalist in the 2018 Readers’ Favorite Contest, an Official Selection in the 2018 Summer eBook Awards for New Apple Literary, and Shortlisted for the Books Go Social Best Book of 2018.
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GUEST POST:
Writing Tip: Deep Characterization Enables Deep POV
by Sedona Hutton
When I first started writing, I found a character worksheet on the Internet and filled it out. Heroine: Age: 24. Red hair, green eyes, lots of curves. Hero: Age: 26. Midnight hair, cobalt eyes, plenty of hard muscle. A few more details and I was ready to write my masterpiece!
I quickly learned that without significant character detail, my manuscript was plagued with inconsistencies and required continuous rework. Even worse, my characters didn’t feel real because I didn’t know them well enough to get inside their heads.
Through research, courses, and good old-fashioned trial and error, I learned the art of deep characterization.
So what is deep characterization? Deep characterization entails developing your characters inside and out. It’s getting to know your main characters as well as you know your best friend.
Deep characterization is not just a physical description nor is it answering a few easy questions. It’s a detailed assessment of your character’s personality, strengths, flaws, and wounds. It’s a comprehensive understanding of his/her childhood, family, friends, pets, phobias, memories, and so on. It’s how he/she relates to the world, how they react to stress and other emotions. It’s even about their favorite food, color, TV show, movie, and book because each of these can offer invaluable nuggets of information about your characters…that is, if you dig deep enough.
There are many ways to create deep characterization. I use deep characterization worksheets, character interviews, and the 5-Why Process. I learned most of these techniques through OIRWA courses taught by Laurie Sanders. For more information, please visit Laurie at: https://lauriesplace.net/.
5-Why Process
This easy process can be used to generate a deep understanding of your character.
Instructions: Take one aspect of your character and ask 5 questions. Sometimes you may find that you need to ask 5 more and then 5 more!
Example
Character: AJ Ryan, the hero in my newly released contemporary romance, The Perfect Lap.
What is AJ’s favorite drink? A shot of Jack Daniels.
Why is this his favorite drink? It brings back warm memories of his granddad who enjoyed an occasional shot of Jack Daniels. AJ moved in with his grandfather when he was 12.
Why did AJ move in with his grandfather? Because his mother couldn’t handle him.
Why couldn’t AJ’s mother handle him? Because AJ got into a lot of trouble, including smoking, getting bad grades, skipping school, taking a joy ride in his neighbor’s car, etc.
Why did AJ get in trouble? It was the only way he could get attention from his mother. Otherwise, she primarily focused on his younger half-brother, Sam.
You can see how this 5-Why exercise helped me dig into AJ’s background. After completing many of these, I gained a deeper understanding of AJ and what makes him tick.
Completing deep characterization before you start writing allows your story to flow from your characters. It also enables writing in a deep point of view. When I start a new story, I complete deep characterization first—even before I develop themes, plots, and outlines. When I start with deep characterization, the rest of it flows with effortless ease.
(This guest post was written by Sedona Hutton, author of romance and women’s fiction novels with new age, spiritual twists.)
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GIVEAWAY:
Sedona Hutton will be awarding a $50 Amazon or Barnes & Noble gift card to one randomly drawn winner via Rafflecopter after the tour. To increase your chance of winning, visit a different stop on the tour and leave a comment on that stop each day. Good luck!
Thanks for hosting!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate you taking the time to give us a great book description and giveaway as well. Thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteHi James - I appreciate the compliment! Hope you're having a wonderful week - :) Sedona
DeleteA big thanks to All the Ups & Downs for hosting this tour and guest blog! Sedona
ReplyDeleteYou are very welcome <3
DeleteLove the sound of this book and great cover.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra. I appreciate the compliments! :) Hope you're having a wonderful week - Sedona
DeleteDo you have any ideas for your next book?
ReplyDeleteHi Bernie - Thanks for stopping by and asking about my WIP. I'm currently working on the last book in my Racing Hearts in Serenity series—Restart in Bristol. This is CC and Holly's love story. As with my other novels, there are new age/spiritual ideas included like balance, intentions, letting go of fears, and not holding onto anger. It's a standalone novel, but for those who have read Nora's Promise and/or The Perfect Lap, many of the same characters are included. AJ and Ella are both in the next story, and Cruz's nephew is included in a sub-plot. I adored Cruz in Nora's Promise, so I couldn't resist writing his nephew, Rob, into Restart in Bristol, which will be out early next year. Thanks again for your question. Have a great evening! 😊 Sedona
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DeleteI love the play on words with "lap." Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteHi Christina - Thanks for stopping by the tour, and I'm glad you entered the giveaway! 😊 I love the title of this story, both for the play on “perfect” and “lap.” I wanted a title that alluded to racing and also represented a key theme in the story, and I found both with the title, The Perfect Lap. In this story, there’s an underlying theme around perfection. Ella’s parents demanded excellence and at the beginning of the story, Ella is a perfectionist. After fostering three kids whose lives are far from perfect and spending time with AJ, Ella comes to understand that perfection is overrated. There’s a touching scene where the kids ask AJ how he achieves perfection to win races. AJ gives them examples to show he’s far from perfect. He shares that you don’t need to be perfect to be successful, you need to consistently do your best. Thanks again for stopping by. I hope you’re having a fabulous week - Sedona
DeleteHi Christina and Sedona,
DeleteThat's one of my favorite scenes in the books. Another favorite scene is the one where AJ and Ella take the kids to Ella's uptight parents' house for Christmas. The parents pick at the kids and no one is having a good time and AJ decides he has to get him out of there. He tells a bit of a lie that the kids call him on and he has to explain. It's a great scene...one of my faves in this book. :)
Sounds like a book I will enjoy reading.
ReplyDeleteHi Rita - Thanks so much. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. 😊 Sedona
DeleteWhat was your favorite part about writing this book?
ReplyDeleteHi Kim – Thanks for stopping by and asking a question. The Perfect Lap was a lot of fun to write because I fell in love with AJ while writing Nora’s Promise and I knew I had to write his story next. One of my Nora’s Promise readers called AJ a “hoot,” which is a perfect description of him. He’s laid back, fun-loving, and full of southern charm…and he’s also a magnet for trouble! I enjoyed developing his and Ella’s romance as a slow burn with lots of chemistry. It was fun having AJ and Ella co-foster three kids. Kids challenge us to learn and grow, and in The Perfect Lap, AJ and Ella help the kids, but the kids help them every bit as much.
DeleteThanks again for stopping by the tour. I hope you have a fabulous weekend 😊 - Sedona
Thanks for answering. I'm going to have to check the book out.
DeleteI love the cover, congrats on the release!
ReplyDeleteHi Julie - Thanks for the congrats and the compliment. Hell Yes Design created the cover and I think they did a great job, too. I hope you have a great evening - 😊 Sedona
DeleteThank you for the giveaway! The cover is a little bland, or maybe that's just me. I don't like the b/w checkerboard. xD
ReplyDeleteHi "WhiteArcticWolffie" - Thanks so much for stopping by the tour, and I appreciate your feedback regarding my cover. We used the flag to draw in the race aspect of the story, but there are other ways we could bring that in. We'll take a look at those when creating the cover for my next novel in the series, Restart in Bristol. Thanks again for sharing your honest feedback. Have a great weekend - Sedona
DeleteIt sounds so romantic.Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHi Judy - Thanks for stopping by the tour, and for the lovely compliment. I hope you're having a fabulous week - 😊 Sedona
DeleteTerrific cover
ReplyDeleteHi Nancy - Thanks for stopping by the tour, and for sharing your feedback on the cover. Lorelei Przybranowski of www.HellYes.design created the cover and I think she did a great job. Thanks again for the compliment. I hope you have a fabulous weekend - 😊 Sedona
DeleteSounds interesting. Thank you for a great giveaway!
ReplyDeleteHi Dorothy - You are most welcome! I appreciate you stopping by the tour. Happy Friday! Sedona
DeleteThanks for sharing the great post!
ReplyDeleteHi Victoria - Thanks for stopping by to check it out. I hope you have a wonderful weekend - :) Sedona
DeleteHi, I love the idea of romance and Nascar..I have never heard of a romance set in that sport. Great idea
ReplyDeleteHi Suzannah - Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun writing the Racing Hearts in Serenity series. I'm a NASCAR fan, but even so, I've learned a lot doing research for the stories in this series. Thanks for stopping by the tour - :) Sedona
DeleteThank you for the giveaway.
ReplyDeleteHi Caryl - You are most welcome! Thanks for visiting this post by All The Ups & Downs. Happy Friday - :) Sedona
DeleteSexy book cover, and the book sounds interesting.
ReplyDeleteHi Deb - Thank you so much! I love the cover too...it was created by Hell Yes Design, and I think they did a fabulous job! Thanks for stopping by the tour and I hope you have a wonderful weekend - Sedona
DeleteThis looks like a fun read. Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Karley. I appreciate you stopping by the tour. Have a wonderful weekend - 😊 Sedona
ReplyDeleteThanks for the opportunity to win. Cover is not my cup of tea but I am sure there are many people who love it. Awesome story idea though
ReplyDeleteHi Sandy - Thanks for stopping by the tour and for your honest feedback regarding the cover. I hope you enjoy The Perfect Lap if you pick it up. Have a great weekend - Sedona
DeleteA big thanks to everyone who has stopped by this tour for THE PERFECT LAP. I’m most appreciative! 😊 I’m happy to answer any other questions that may be out there. I’d also like to invite you to visit my website at: https://sedonahutton.com/ and sign up for my Peace-Love-Joy blog newsletter if you are so inclined. I blog every couple of weeks, and when you sign up for my newsletter, new blogs are delivered to you via email. I blog on the same new age/spiritual topics that I include in my stories: gratitude, the Law of Attraction, focusing on the now, non-judgment, the idea that everyone’s doing the best they can from where they are, the power of positive thinking, etc.
ReplyDeleteWishing everyone a weekend of sunshine and joy! 😊 Sedona
I love the "flag" fabric on the cover. It's very clever. Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteHi Christina - Thanks so much for the compliment on the cover. The cover was created by Hell Yes Design, and I'm pleased with how it turned out, too. Hope you have a wonderful weekend - :) Sedona
DeleteThis book sounds awesome and I can't wait to read it!
ReplyDeleteHi Debbie - Thanks for stopping by the tour. I hope you enjoy reading The Perfect Lap as much as I enjoyed writing it. 😊 Happy Friday! Sedona
DeleteThis sounds like a great book! Looking forward to reading it.
ReplyDeleteHi Peg - Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy reading The Perfect Lap. Have a fabulous weekend! 😊 Sedona
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a great romance read! I love the cover!
ReplyDeleteHi Angela - Thanks for stopping by to read about The Perfect Lap, and I appreciate the compliments. Have a happy day! 😊 Sedona
DeleteWhat do you think are the most important magazines for writers to subscribe to?
ReplyDeleteHi Sandy - I receive the RWA's Romance Writers Report and Writer's Digest magazine. Both include great writing tips on everything from plotting to managing your time as a writer. Personally, I've learned even more through writing classes because they tend to be more hands-on. The most beneficial ones I've found are through OIRWA (https://www.oirwa.com/) and Laurie Sanders, who often teaches through the OIRWA (https://lauriesplace.net/.) Thanks for stopping by the tour and for your question. I hope you're having a fabulous weekend - 😊 Sedona
DeleteThe Guest Post contained valuable information about forming characters.
ReplyDeleteHi KC - I'm so glad it was helpful. Thanks for stopping by the tour. I hope you're having a great weekend - 😊 Sedona
ReplyDeleteI like the cute couple on the cover. Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteHi Christina - Thanks so much...I selected this picture because the couple looks like how I envision AJ and Ella. Hell Yes Design created the cover and I think they did a great job. I appreciate you stopping by the tour. Hope you have a wonderful week! 😊 Sedona
ReplyDeleteI like the white sweater on the cover. Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteThanks Christina! I like that sweater too...I'd like to find one just like it. 😊 Sedona
DeleteAs a writer, what would you choose as your mascot/avatar/spirit animal?
ReplyDeleteHi Sandy - I'm particular fond of cows so I have to believe they are my spirit animals. Dudley, a beautiful cow who lived at The Gentle Barn in Tennessee inspired me to write Nora's Promise, the first story in my Racing Hearts in Serenity series. If you're interested, you can learn more about Dudley's story (and watch an inspiring video) on The Gentle Barn's website. Thanks for the great question - Sedona
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the shout out/recommendation of my classes/workshops/methods for deep characterization.
I very much enjoy teaching the classes. Next month (August) I'm teaching a class on the sales package (query letter, cover letter, synopsis) at OIRW. In September I'm teaching about deep point of view which is central to creating characters that jump off the page. That will also be at OIRW. In October it's on to Developing Emotional Tension in the Romance Novel at OIRW. The emotion class digs a lot into character type and so would be a good class for someone wanting to get their feet wet with deep characterization.
Thanks again for recommending my classes. I'm glad you've enjoyed them so much. I love reading your stories. I love the depth of characters, the spiritual topics, the humor. They are really fun stories.
Hi Laurie - Thanks for your compliments about my stories. They are extra meaningful coming from you! 😊
DeleteFor any writers out there, I highly recommend Laurie's classes. I've gained so much from every class I've attended. I've taken her Deep Point of View class twice and learned a lot both times. I've taken her classes on emotions as well, and they were outstanding. If anyone is interested, please check out the schedule at: https://www.oirwa.com/... And for more information on Laurie, tips on writing, quilting, spirituality, and a few other tidbits, visit her at: https://lauriesplace.net/.
Laurie, thanks again for stopping by the tour! Sedona
I just noticed how long this blog tour is...that's a lot of touring! Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteWhat kind of research do you do, and how long do you spend researching before beginning a book?
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Sounds good!
ReplyDeleteWhen did you start writing?
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ReplyDeleteI've never heard of the Racing Hearts in Serenity series. Thanks for the giveaway!
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ReplyDeleteThis book was published on my daughter's birthday (not same year though). Cool. Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteDo you write every day?
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ReplyDelete"His job is to drive fast. Hers is to put the brakes on him." Isn't that always the way it is between men and women, lol. Thanks for the giveaway!
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ReplyDeleteWent to an Indigo Girls concert last night. Do you go to live music concerts?
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ReplyDelete"AJ Ryan is a publicity nightmare." Those are the best kind, lol. Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteWhen did you first consider yourself a writer?
ReplyDeleteIt's my birthday!
ReplyDelete"After a questionable photo surfaces and his biggest sponsor threatens to pull out, the NASCAR champion admits it might be time to hit the brakes."
ReplyDeleteGotta watch those sponsors, lol. Thanks for the giveaway!
Describe your writing space.
ReplyDeleteWhat time of the day do you usually write?
ReplyDeleteNothing worse than a sexy image consultant, lol. Thanks for the giveaway!
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ReplyDelete"Ella Fisher’s career is a welcome distraction from her poor taste in men."
ReplyDeleteI hate it when we have poor taste in men, lol. Thanks for the giveaway!
Describe a typical writing day.
ReplyDeleteDo you swim?
ReplyDeleteWhat is the most difficult part about writing for you?
ReplyDelete"Fresh off another easily avoidable heartbreak, rehabbing AJ’s career is just the diversion she needs." Work is a great solace in times like these. Thanks for the giveaway!
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ReplyDelete"Ella wonders if there’s more to the man behind the hot mess." There's always more to the man, lol. Thanks for the giveaway!
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ReplyDelete"When Ella is granted guardianship of three boisterous children under the misconception that she and AJ are a couple, AJ surprises her by going along with the charade."
ReplyDeleteWell this is an interesting twist. I'm very curious now. Thanks for the giveaway!
We had a big thunderstorm today. Did you?
ReplyDeleteIs writing your full-time career? Or would you like it to be?
ReplyDelete"Before long they find themselves in a make-shift family that feels more real than pretend."
ReplyDeleteI can relate, lol. Thanks for the giveaway!
On a typical day, how much time do you spend writing?
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ReplyDeleteWhen you’re writing an emotionally draining (or sexy, or sad, etc) scene, how do you get in the mood?
ReplyDeleteDo you like the heat? Hit 100 here today.
ReplyDeleteWriting can be an emotionally draining and stressful pursuit. Any tips for aspiring writers?
ReplyDeleteHow do you deal with emotional impact of a book (on yourself) as you are writing the story?
ReplyDeleteFinally cooled off a bit here. Did it there?
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ReplyDeleteHow much ‘world building’ takes place before you start writing?
ReplyDeleteIs there lots to do before you drive in and start writing the story?
ReplyDeleteSometimes everyone can be a little bit of a nightmare, I know I can be, but some probably take it so far.
ReplyDeleteAre you doing anything this 3 day weekend?
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ReplyDeleteDo you get hurricanes? We sometimes get blizzards.
ReplyDeleteI swim for exercise. What do you do?
ReplyDeleteHave a good weekend.
ReplyDeleteThe characters sound great, very interesting
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ReplyDeleteHave any of your books been made into audiobooks? If so, what are the challenges in producing an audiobook?
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ReplyDeleteDoing anything special this weekend?
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ReplyDeleteDid you write much over the weekend?
ReplyDeleteI think the cover fits well and gives the reader a good idea of what the outcome will be. ;)
ReplyDeleteAre you getting Fall weather yet?
ReplyDeleteWhat kind of weather puts you in the mood to write?
ReplyDeleteI love the cover and cannot wait to read the book!
ReplyDeletesounds like a fun one
ReplyDeleteWhat’s your favorite spot to visit in your own country? And what makes it so special to you?
ReplyDeleteI am new to Sedona Hutton and her work. I am glad this blog introduced me to her. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you for hosting this giveaway. Looks like an exceptional romance Rosanne
ReplyDeleteWhat did you do for Valentine’s Day? Is Valentine’s something you like to celebrate?
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the contest.